poetry improv

a very random note
thats mostly a conversation quote
i share a rather brilliant stroke
of poetry that rust wittily wrote

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silverust says:
let me attempt rhymy funny poem
silverust says:
give me a theme
silverust says:
(I think errol is better at tt)
pearls says:
haha er talk abt carrots
silverust says:
wah.

once upon a time

rabbit wanted to do crime

packed his evil bag and covered his face like a mime

went to the supermarket with gun in hand

told the cashier "hand me the carrots!"

but the cashier was deaf - he heard rabbit wanted 3 parrots

so the cashier went to the household department and got him some feathers

rabbit was mad, said "where are my carrots?"

"Boss, these are the only parrots i could find. from the feather duster"

Rabbit got mad, but turtle jumped and laughed, said "could cashier be any dumber?"

turtle challenged rabbit to a race, said "let us go see if I can be faster"

so rabbit took the challenge and said "when it comes to speed, I am the master"

So rabbit ran off... and turtle called the police.

the end.

pearls says:
woohooooo
pearls says:
well done!! *applause*
pearls says:
i like it alot. can i blog it now?
silverust says:
sure.
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think poetry improv is cool
requires more wit - not for fools
there are little rules
just need a theme & writing tools
its like fluffing quirky wool
you should definitely try it too! :)